Dear Fellow!

A look at that split second we through caution to the wind!

Slipping nectar on yielding flesh abate,

Salted tears come hard  to the fore,

Reddish cheeks not used to smile,

Fall soft upon that polished wood floor.

Gaping silence just breath to be heard,

False truths give sweet kisses sold,

Backing all that we hold close today,

Now, now dear fellow how bold.

Perfect fingers lay heavy on painted thighs,

Tiny veins scream in speed to the skin,

Flaccid memories are far from us in time,

No people to bind him to kith and kin.

One last push to make promise of next time,

Head spinning rushes last all to short,

Gentle tapping on my bedroom door,

Makes us jump and think for now abort!

Author's Note

Be honest and striking as you always are my darlings!

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

One last push to make promise of next time,
Head spinning rushes last all to short,
Gentle tapping on my bedroom door,
Makes us jump and think for now abort!

Well … it is certainly hot in here. A invigorating write, to say the least. You lucky, duck.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Briana O'Connor]

This has to be the most beautiful expression of the naughty have ever seen. lol. At first I thought it was about something else until I reread it. That is how subtle and eloquent your words were. This was true brilliance. I absolutely loved this!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[francis]

good job my friend.nice piece of writing.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[TL Boehm]

ah - the ache of an interrupted moment...love the words in this it has that old world quality to it. And the rhyme is simply splendid.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

You must have young kids in the house! :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

No - but I was young once!

[Rene Velez]

Love, even forbidden love is unavoidable, the chemistry and connection wether mental or lustful will happen... enjoyable Thomas, enticing and humorous.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[EJF]

Liked it, made me think of some experiences I've had... got lost in the day dream.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Matching Socks]

Haha, gently tapping on the door... :)
There were other good lines but I laughed out loud.
Because who hasn't been interrupted this way?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, thank you.

[s y e]

Thomas, this is outstanding work, as always. I am so happy to see you writing and posting again - fantastic work as always!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you my darling.

[Valentine]

Deeply romantic, sad ending. you are improving my friend. Valentine

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.