Big black creature

I wake up,

Look outside to see aftermath,

A storm happened in the night,

Walk outside to the feeling of being hit with spray

The mist,

I look into the distance,

Too foggy to see the trees,

I see a cluster of black walking towards me,

I get shivers, my stomach turns like a roller coaster,

but I stay standing there, waiting with anticipation on what this creature is,

A beast,

The biggest I've ever seen,

With its fur running down its body,

I clench my fists, tense,

It growls,

So loud I feel its breath reach my face,

Making my hair blow to the back of me,

He stares at me,

With his big brown eyes,

I put my hand out,

It sniffs me and knows i'm no harm,

It walks away,

The black creature,

beautiful and misty like the day. 

Reviews

[Serena Monteleone]

I really like this! you used really good description! I love all of your writing so far! Nice job girl!

[Katie]

Thank you!, but I do know I spelled Stares wrong, hahahahah stars

[Serena Monteleone]

lol well thats okay! I'm pretty sure you already knew how to spell it ;) gives me inspiration to write a poem about stars? hahaha

[Katie]

very funny hahahahahahahah