Sadness

Early poem of mine that i wrote when i was depressed, so dont expect too much.

Sadness

Overwhelming, complicated. Lonely.

No one understands.

No one listens.

Everyone walks past, immersed in their own lives,

Not noticing that right next to them, something wretched is happening.

Not caring about others. Just themselves.

Why don’t they notice? Is television really that interesting?

No one cares.

No one understands.

Lonely.

Reviews

[kollaboratyve]

This poem has a solid construction. I enjoyed the sensory imput it gave as I read it. I'm impressed at the flow of the words, and the thought connection. Your writing is very intentional, and I feel that your creativity will balance off your knowing how to structure the mechanics of poetry in future writings. You have some stong metaphors that set the rone of the poem . The imagery allows you to see the situation unfolds right before your eyes. Overall, this is a good work! I hope to read more poems and and/or stories written by you.

[poetforlife]

So sad that so many people live their lives with the same empty emotion that you express here. Brave of you to put it on paper and you did a great job. Hope you're not in that place anymore. Thanks for sharing with us.