An Eternity Out Of Forever.

My boyfriend's parents got sick of him being on the computer (and MSN, talking to me) so they've banned him from it for a night. There's hours till I can sleep and I miss him =( *moody teenage girl*

A night without you here with me,

Even if just through technology.

But a night without you…

It will be Hell. Hell on Earth.

We’ve said we’ll be together forever,

Our love is forever.

But tonight is an eternity out of forever…

I love you.

I depend on you,

I need you here with me.

Here.

Now.

Please.

Let him come back to me.

He’s my oxygen, my blood, my life.

I need him with me.

A night without you is an eternity,

But I’ll wait an eternity till you’re by my side,

Forever.

Reviews

[J.S. Pua]

I have to agree..
One word lines made it believable..
nice piece..

[TadKent]

Also, the one word lines alos help me feel the distance you describe in your piece.

[TadKent]

Love the format/lack of. The One line chaos and emphasis makes it raw and believable. Please keep writing more. = ]

[E. L. Foley]

I love your title, and the feeling you've captured. I suffered through a summer of a transatlantic relationship, and I definitely felt this on occasions, hoping to catch him on messenger or skype.