One August Day...

The first time I heard your voice,
I had made my choice.
The very moment I saw your picture,
I knew you were the one.

I love the way you make me smile,
that's what makes waiting worth while.
I wish you were here,
so I would nothing to fear.

I'm glad you told me how you felt that one August day,
I was happy to tell you that I felt the same way.

Until our eyes meet and I feel that you are here,
I will keep you my thoughts my dear.
I hope you will keep me in your thoughts too,
and that you will always be true.

Reviews

[The Autumn Faerie]

A dear little thing, but you could use to revise it once more. There were a few words missing here and there. In the second line, shouldn't that be 'choice,' because I don't think 'coice' is a word...
Nice feeling, though.

[Lauren Burch]

there are a few spelling mistakes. :

another great read about real love, or at least about what we as humans perceive as love.