In Just a Few..

I actually wrote this poem when my ex broke up with me in 9th grade ^_^;

In just a few minutes, we met
In just a few days, we were friends
In just a few hours, I realized I loved you
In just a few words, you said you loved me
In just a few weeks, we kissed
In just a few hours, I was in heaven
In just a few words, you broke my heart
In just a few days, you asked for me back
In just a few thoughts, I turned you down
In just a few moments, I missed you
In just a few painful memories, I knew you weren't worth my tears
In just a few minutes, I knew you weren't my prince charming...

In just a few seconds, I loved you, and in just a few minutes, you broke my heart.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem when I was in 9th grade, so it might not be THAT great.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

I really liked the pattern in the couple of lines, but to be honest, I got a little tired of the repetition after that. Then again, patterns have been driving me crazy in my own poems lately lol. But since you're doing patterns, I really think that the last line should be broken into 2 to keep with the rest of it.

[Wondering Mind]

This is deeper than seems at first. O! the unfairness of Love, at times.