Fear

Poem about fear

 

My heart races at the speed of light

A chill rushes down my spine

My hands are trembling

My legs are weakening

I can barely breathe

My stomach is tightening

My throat burns

I feel like screaming but can’t open my mouth to do so

I start to tremble all over

I want to run but it felt like my feet were cemented to the ground

I was in fear and could do nothing about it.

Author's Note

I made this in my 9th grade creative writing class

Reviews

[Zeek4]

Fear is not a pleasant feeling is it? I think when you were in the 9th grade you captured the feeling of fear well. I noticed one error in this line..My starts to tremble all over...my what starts to tremble? Keep writing young lady!