Lost...

At times I feel like I've

 

Lost all my being

 

Lost all my feelings

 

Lost every emotion

 

Known to man.

 

But then I think

 

About what I've done

 

And I've come to realize

 

What I have become.

 

I don't wanna be

 

Who they want me to be.

 

Not some little passerby

 

Tripping over my feet

 

Just to catch a glance

 

At the only fruit bearing tree.

 

I wanna be me

 

And only me.

 

Not like anybody else.

 

Just who I am.

 

Can you accept it?

 

Could you handle it?

 

Seeing the new me?

 

The me with hopes and dreams?

 

Would you be like the rest?

 

Smash me down?

 

Forcing me to confess

 

My inner most secrets?

 

My inner most desires?

 

Or would you be different

 

And let me breathe

 

And just be what I wanna be...?

Reviews

[badgirl beth]

So hard to find the right one to accept the passion of another without having experienced them on their journey of life..but hail to that special one whom can't give enough to you and breathe with you..in the sensuality of life's glorious union...Brillian write..Cheers;)

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

We are all lost only way to be found is by finding who we are and who we are meant for then we are complete

[Pinky]

beautifully deep... great write!

[Shadows of Sight]

Be you! A wonderful honest poem about human emotions of needing to be accepted for oneself, and not be controled by others!
Great Write! :)