Love Blood

The first time I saw you
I was drugged
Love rushed through my body
And my eyes opened up

I knew life would change 
and that night has stayed
In my blood
like a high exchange

It was my favorite thing
Years in a happy haze
I'll never stop counting the ways
It put a smile on my face
 
The drug began to fade
There was nothing I could do
Except scream into the sky
And crave that forgotten high

The supply grew
I should have been happy
I should have soaked it up
Instead
I f*****g flew  
Far, far away

I was faded
And craved the highest skies
told myself all these lies
Addicted to saying goodbye

I should have known
That out of all the rushes
My blood
Only craves
Your love

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rajah de AzinPrinz Phyb..]

Love is an addictive drug and when it is in vain it can be quite the rush until you crash. Great poem.

[hagi]

The overall rhythm is fine, though I think the 5th and last stanzas could be made to rhyme better.
Thank you for sharing :)