Bliss

Romantic, somewhat sad poem filled with what bliss is! :)

You reached down

For one last kiss

Our last moment

Of pure bliss

Will I ever

See you again?

And if I do

When?

How long can I hold back

Those silent tears

That just want to fall

During your absent years?

Promise me

You will return

Or my heart will seize

With forlorn

On the doorstep

I will wait

For you to appear

On our promised date

I'll run to you

When you arrive

Joy in my heart

Finally feeling alive

Then you reach down 

For a forever kiss

A special moment

Of pure bliss

Author's Note

I wanted to focus on what I was trying to say through the words, so that you could get what I think can make you blissful. I hope you liked this! :)

Reviews

[Jazique]

Awe so sweet with the rhyming of blissful kiss. This is how I want my first kiss to be. This will be my bliss so well done. Descriptions and all of the perfect bliss.

[Tasha]

This was amazing! Keep up the good work.

[akapr17other]

Sometimes you think you could live in one moment for the rest of your life, but you couldn't really because life does go on, and I think it's good it does. I mean, you need some time to look back on that moment and be grateful for how amazing it was. Anyway, I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

This was extremley lovely. Fabulous job.

[Jennika has a short att..]

Ah bliss. So many perceptions with very different people. You're view of bliss and my view of bliss are very different indeed, but I do have to say, you put yours out in a very unique way. Very interesting choice of topic to write about. Not many people feel that they can write down this state of happiness. You my friend, have succeeded(sp?). I understand your train of thought and I felt like that's how I believed it to be. Great job young padawan. xD

[Krystal Nicole]

I absolutely love it!!!!! keep up the good job

[Murtuza]

Yes, you've accomplished in your purpose of writing this poem. I really like it! It's sweet and pure! Lovely :)

[Blue Eyes]

I love this! Great job! :)

[Erinne S.]

This was sweet and simply put :) I liked how the words flowed and I could tell you were writing from the heart which is always a good thing when you are writing poetry. Great job with this piece!!

~Erinne