Ocean Shore

Sand in my toes

And the wind in my hair

Ocean waves crash

Bringing salt to the air

The hot July sun

Shines overhead

Bright and beautiful

With a touch of red

Countless seashells

Rest on the ocean shore

And up above

Is where the seagulls soar

Barefoot

On a beautiful day

At the sandy beach

Where I wish to always stay

Author's Note

I love the beach! :)

Reviews

[Amen_Poppies]

This poem is very inspiring and beautifully written. I love the ryhme incorporated. Great job!

[akapr17other]

I love this poem! I love the beach so so so so so so much. I live in Seattle and I love it here but lets be honest our beaches are awful. I want to go to school in California so bad (mostly because of the fabulous beaches). But yeah great poem, a favorite of mine. Sorry for rambling I pretty sure I just went valley girl all over this review.

[Erinne S.]

This made me feel like I was there, and boy do I wish I was right now. It's raining and cold here right now :(
Anyway this was another great piece!!

~Erinne

[Tate Morgan]

The beach where dreams are formed and journeys begin and end

[Norma M Sutton]

Well done. I could feet the wind in my hair and the sand between my toes.

[Julie Beth]

this was really good i could picture this in my head it was beautiful love going to the beach :)

[Krystal Nicole]

I havent ever been to a beach before, but the way you described it sounds awesome!!! Great job!! Oh, and by the way, my name is KRYSTAL, not kathie

[Jazique]

Nice had rhyme time with descriptions and all. Well done and just amazing to describe the ocean, the place I wish to be right now with the sandy beach and ocean waves crashing you speak of. So wonderful job and thank you for giving me a taste of the ocean I can not yet go to.