I Love You

This is a poem on love.

There's something I need to say,
Today seems like the perfect day.
You're with me,
Together we are free.
I just want to let you know,
I never want to let you go.
With every inch of my heart,
I never want us to part.
Let's just stay this way,
Forever stuck in today.
Frozen with your lips on mine,
As the stars start to align.
I love you more than I've ever loved before.
Let's see, together, what tomorrow has in store.

Reviews

[The Auctor]

This is great, the rhymes aren't forced or anything, although I don't like how it ended with uncertainty

[Kaitlynn]

Do you know how I could end it better?

[The Auctor]

No, it's more of a personal preference for me, its alright on its own.

[Kaitlynn]

Thank you. :)