Take My Hand

Take my hand

and come with me

There's somewhere else I'd rather be.

 

A different time

a different day

Somewhere very far away.

 

Come! You'll find

you have no cares

There are no fears or worries there.

 

No troubled thoughts

to plague your mind

Or broken hearts to try to bind.

 

If you would, please

come along

Give a shout or sing a song

 

For our destination

knows no woe

So take my hand and off we'll go!

Author's Note

Correct, criticize, advise! Tell me what you think! :D

Reviews

[Jay. E. V.]

FINALLY! A lovely poem about living life instead of some dark horrid string of events. Don't get me wrong, I'm a fan of much of the dark stuff. But I needed this today=D. Thanks. Very Sing songy, very bright. Loved it also. 100/100

[Kaitlyn]

:D
Well, I'm glad that I could assist you in your need for uplifting poetry!

And I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[cooper]

Well ..really struck a chord with me a cancer survivor. Loved it.

[Kaitlyn]

:) I'm glad that you liked it.

I'm sorry to hear that you had to struggle through that, but I'm very glad that you made it out.

Love and luck to you, friend.

[shinybluestars03]

Great short poem.
It really captures your emotions completely in
such a short piece.
Keep on writing
Thanks for sharing.

[Kaitlyn]

Thank you~! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[TheKaylaPup]

OK, where to?
I really like this one. It's fun.
However, for the sake of consistency, you should have this all in the same font. The change doesn't appear to be intentionally stylistic, and is a bit distracting.

[Kaitlyn]

:) Pardon that, it was completely unintentional. Corrected.

[TheKaylaPup]

It's an easy mistake to make. Good job!