Asphyxiation

Erotica poem

The rush of endorphins

like prickly pins;

his hands around my throat,

squeezing tighter and tighter

until I lose my breath.

Mascara eyes tearring up,

face turning red

as I struggle to breathe.

My senses heightened..

I look up at him,

innoceant eyes clothed

in full submission to my master,

plump lips poked out,

mattered hair in two ponytails.

I see the look in his eyes,

pure sadimsm,

his arousal too high

to hold much longer...

And as he lets go we climax

together.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Celestial Witch Child]

I like how you chose an interesting and "taboo" topic- definitely something that isn't written about frequently. I find myself wondering how things are from his point of view, as well. It's well written, though while reading I spotted a couple spelling mistakes- "tearing," used in the sixth line, only has one "r." And "sadism," in the fifth line from the bottom should only have one "m". Keep up the good work.

[Ian H Morrison]

fantastic so well written so intense yet so loveing

[That_Girl]

Really nice. The Reviewer sent this to me... love it! He's right... intense!

[Crazy Cat Man]

wow this is intense. at first i thought it was gonna be about autoerotic asphyxiation. wow great piece

[kayla]

oh wow, you changed your picture! lol. I was thinking "who is this guy...oh, Reviewer!" lol. thanks(:

[Crazy Cat Man]

lol this is my next tattoo. Im thinking of getting this image tattooed on my foot :D

[kayla]

haha cool idea(: You can still get a job with it so thats good

[Crazy Cat Man]

well i have lots of tattoos already mostly on my arms. I just wear long sleeves for interviews. :D

[Crazy Cat Man]

awesome poem though. its intense

[Coyote Poetry]

May need a adult rating. Giving pain for pleasure is the extreme. Your description was direct. Some topics are hard to write about. I stay away from the topics of some things. Thank you for sharing the interesting poem.
Coyote

[Zombie Waffle]

Interesting...
Well-writen, if a bit disturbing.

[Tai Ryens]

Erotica is not really my preference of writing, but I did enjoy the first few lines (Considering that I thought you were speaking of death). Fine job indeed.