Between the Sheets

In bed with you, I know that it's right
to let you hold me, to stay the night.
The warmth of your breath, your hands on my face,
fervent fingers rubbing against lace.
I look into your eyes, your hand in mine,
bodies quivering to the hands of time.
I know you're my love, and i fall asleep,
hands and legs intertwined beneath the sheets.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Maan]

:) Sounds like last lovely thought before falling asleep. Though it sounds beautiful. I like it.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

Rhyme scheme and all, this was a great read

[nigrum homonculus]

awww this was cute! i like the rhyming and flow scheme of it. you did well with this piece. i like it