Accidental Melancholic Tempermental

This love of ours

I came to question;

wondering

of your deception.

Tears in my eyes

much too early;

wondering if you

meant to hurt me.

Or is it just

an accidental

melancholic

tempermatal

side-effect

of being with you?

You're ups and downs,

your "I love you's".

My puzzle pieces

fell apart,

should I have loved

from the start?

Tears in my eyes,

is it true

when you say

love me too?

Or is it just another

accidental

melancholic

tempermental

side affect

of being with you?

You're ups and downs,

your "I love you's".

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[DeliriousCerises]

I really enjoyed this. Repetition is something that is so easily overused, or just done badly, but I liked the repetition, you placed them very well so it really emphasizes the poem's message and emotion instead of detracting from it, like so easily happens to a lot of poems. It also gives it a somewhat lyrical sense and a nice flow.

[afra]

good jobs ....keep writing

[Tiffy Yvonne]

i love the way it ends

[kayla]

thx(: