Dark Sensuality

I imagine you beside me

kissing my neck

as the darkness surrounds me

and I begin to sweat.

"You're my little girl

and you'll do as I say,

I am the master,

and you are my slave."

Your words warm my heart

as it beats double time.

You lock the collar around my neck

as you say, "You are mine."

I do as I am a told,

I submit to your will;

because just the act of being helpless

gives me the biggest thrill.

When the pain has hit its climax

and you can't hold it anymore,

we release as you stand up

and I'm still tied up on the floor.

But even as you untie me

I know nothing between us has changed

because we still love each other

exactly the same.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Cece]

This is really good! It reminds me of the book "Fifty Shades of Grey"! Its different but honestly, I'm not very fond of the ending. But I love the emotion and idea! Great job :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I like it

[Michael of Gilead]

Sensually erotic with a nice flow to it.

[GunMetal]

Very carnal. I like the simplicity of it. Like Coyote said, "You said enough to create thoughts and vision." Well done.

[Brittany]

Good job with this. I like the desire and emotion.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good erotic poem. You said enough to create thoughts and vision. A good writer can give enough to express their desire without describing in detail all things. You did very well. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tiffy Yvonne]

I love it, gives me courage to post mines lol

[kayla]

thx(: