injustice

to say that i love you

seems to be an injustice

the day turns into morning

but my thoughts remain constant

you in any dress

clothing doesn't matter in

matters of the soul

yes, i was attracted to your beauty

a honeybee seeking nectar

but when you said my name

the fields were full of nectar

and i tried to surround every drop of you

because i knew your name

and your name beckoned

a meadow of marigolds

an attraction as simple as recognition

and ignited by the past storms of spring

when you struggle

i'll hold the rope with you

when you think you can't keep up

i'll carry you

and when you feel cheated

i'll rewrite the rules

because i do love you

and i will

longer than there is injustice

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

So powerful! Bravo again. This is what a real man appreciates about a woman and its so refreshing for a man to be writing it. Love it just love it!!!

[Lorelei]

I must say, I always have loved your choice of words. They invoke so much meaning and emotion. To love someone beyond injustice is a strong love, indeed, one that requires courage and strength from both lovers. :)

[teddybard]

Breathtaking piece of writing,

[Raven Starhawk]

It holds my attention with loving and caring hands. In my head your voice is potent and yet soft and heart warming. I can read this and feel the emotion as well as recognize superb talent.

[Sourav]

Very romantic and heartfelt poem. Seems emotions are very genuine. Nice read... enjoyed it! :)

[Daytonight]

Oh Sir Knight of Romance you have penned a truly eloquent love poem. It takes my breath away and totally appeals to the hopeless romantic in me. Touches my soul. Well penned. Keep up the amazing work.