in-between

watching you

sitting on top of this satellite 

i've seen you much closer

but sometimes i have to enter the stars

in order to dream

lately i've been beset by speculation

that i cannot predict anymore

than i can predict sunspots

i just know a connection has been made between

space and close

i see the silver of your city

spotted by trails of ruby stone

and this bird miles above you 

catches the sparkle with both eyes

free fall back to a change

a change from

far to near

Reviews

[Daytonight]

A very beautiful poem Sir Knight. Almost an other worldly quality about it. Well done. Keep on penning.

[emmajoy]

Two worlds, two people, on a more than possible collision course? Fluent words, finely threaded in a quiet, contented way and moments to spare, time to think, looking forward. ' ,. this bird miles above you ~ catches the sparkle with both eyes ~ free fall back to a change ~ a change from ~ far to near '

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very calm, and serene poem. I really enjoyed reading it. A real good feel good poem. Thanks for posting it. It was just what I needed in my day. Excellent writing!