The Ebb of Reason

Revelations from within.

An abstract thought

imagination fragments

we clutch them to our breast

Questing to turn back time

instead we lurch ahead

But time is fleeting

you're not breathing

Can you hear me anyway?

A lucid dream

waking nightmare

my reasoning is ebbed

To find the light 

we look inside

Will I see you there?

Emotions flowing 

Where are you going?

Can I meet you there?

Reviews

[Confuser]

I loved it! Questing to Turn Back Time, instead we lurch ahead. I enjoyed it. When I read something and it makes me think and see it's fascinating to me. Thank you.

[K.N. Thorn]

Thank you Confuser I am glad to know it brought you such pleasure. I couldn't hope for better experience for a reader.

[Confuser]

Thank you, and for the grammar change of one of my poems. You are kind. And a fantastic poet!

[K.N. Thorn]

Thank you much! You are also very kind and I am glad to have made a friend like you and the others I am getting to know on here :)

[Confuser]

My name is DaleSpringsMitchum, if you use facebook; I'm not on there often. Anyway...

[Rachel Harper]

I can really feel the confusion and overload of thoughts in the voice of this poem. Very creative and introspective.

[K.N. Thorn]

Thank you :)

[B.J]

I enjoy the read of your work it flowed brilliantly and painted a vivid picture

[K.N. Thorn]

Thank you, this is one of the more special ones to me...

[B.J]

Well done:)....................