Take a Left for the Right Path

Read each line separately, then together. They say different messages.

Constant decision

Put off

Put up with it

Or break free

From happiness

From love

That’s run its course

But is headed the right way

The correct way, that is

Just not sure

If it’s right

Or left

Behind is my past

Which is you

Who hasn’t made it

To my future

Yet

Reviews

[Ian Duncan Arbogast]

Hello there. I really like this poem. It has a nice pace to it. I also love how it incorporates the title in so many lines like an echo. You have some serious talent. You deserve more appeal 'cause you're pretty good! I look forward to more from you.

I would also like to point out that I love the tone of this piece. Fantastic write!


-Ian Arbogast 2009 Age 15

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very intriguing and creative piece of writing... I think it boldly depicts just how complicated life is when making decisions of the heart. A very cool piece.