love

nerves shaky palms sweaty.

knees are aching.

heart is heavy.

words are jumbled.

sounds stupid.

through the heart.

struck by cupid.
in the air.

through the trees.

love is afterme.

it seems.

love has come within,

the hour.

never knew disguised flower.

heart beating outta breath.

although it seems

weve just met.

i just hope i'm not mistaking.

my heart is yours for the taking.

Reviews

[Dye]

Definitely sounds like love. You have described it just right. You write like a romantic Koty. Very sweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

The emotion of love can take all our thoughts and make us crazy with the desire of love. I like your description. You described the emotion of love with skill. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very nicely described,liked it........keep it up dear.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

the attention you give to the sounds of the words always impresses me, keep this way, it's just amazing !!

[koty bell]

might of made a mistake on this one it sounds alot like the hallmark card at the end of mr deeds uses some of the same words whoops

[H-Jonesy]

Risky business indeed.
Loved this piece here, it seemed to cover most of the emotions one might feel from love. It flows well, and everything.
Great write!

Caio~

Harmony

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. beautiful ... lovable ... love is risky business ...