emotions

mixed emotions no potion.

gone i'm sure, no cure.

keep going won't stop.

keeps growing.

emotions mixed.

like the caramel in a twix.

first bite all bliss.

around they still flutter.

lose or win.

unknown when it begins.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and the twist of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Geraldine]

Short yet so cute. ^^ very well written.

[Cassie Fraga]

yes... yes... yes... I can sooooooo relate to this... damn mixing emotions... **uuuuggghhhh** the madness of it all!!!
very nice writing my friend thank you for sharing!!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

simple and meaningful..liked it.

[dillonjensen]

Very creative poem here and I like the way you set it up comparing emotions to Twix haha. If you look at it though, it quite simply makes sense as you said the "first bite all bliss" and then it can drastically change very soon after as we often see in life. Short and to the point poems are usually the ones that hit home the best, well done.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

a very appealing poem that sounds just like music, i see you've done it with a lot of love, i can see you've chosen every word carefully, they just mix up perfectly ;)
well done =D

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. ahhhh ... brilliant ... (i remember my soul mate once said something about waking me up with "rise and shine, honey" and i was pissed and he said "ohhhhhhhh, emoooooootion ??? ") ... emotions are as complex as they are simple ... hence at times mixed and at times pure beyond measure ...