my soul

my soul is burning.

hearts desire.

my chest is beating.

love like fire.

intertwined with burning passion.

attacked by cupid.

like an assasin.

 

Reviews

[Roe]

very powerful write. even if its only in a few lines

[K.]

absolutely gorgeous. so much said in so little.
I love it, fantastic work

[Geraldine]

Very good poem. :D

[Jvonne]

Lovely, great write :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Nice expression of feelings....

[The White Wolf]

Since when is Eros an assassin? :) Very sweet poem!

[Xerclipse]

thats a good poem. keep it up

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. haha! ... cupid would faint ... but i think this is brilliantly written ...