the sweetest flower

you are the sweetest flower, i've ever smelt.

the softest hand i've ever had the privledge to hold.

the truest kiss my lips have felt.

your love is my drug.

without it i'll die.

your beauty is toxic.

dangerous yes.

but the daredevil in me, can't help but try.

trapt inside your amazing eyes.

to you i think upon the hour.

by far you are the sweetest flower.

 

Reviews

[Lani Lou]

... who was this about?.....

[koty bell]

I dont remember honestly wrote it a long time ago

[Roe]

amazing write!

[youngwriter222]

beautifully written my friend :)
The title says it all. Isn't it wonderful to find that one that you can call your "sweetest flower"

[.]

. beautiful beyond measure ... magical and lyrical ...

[tizzy k]

sweet

[justice]

:) you truly do write from the heart. I really enjoyed the read. You have a great imagination and a way of putting the image into the reader's mind. Thanks for sharing!

[Nobody.]

another sweet poem.
but what I enjoyed most about it was the 'toying with danger' part in the middle. that gave it a-whole-nother flavor.

cheers!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oh the adoration comes through like sunshine~ warming~ a lovely poem~