just me/all alone

all alone in this world.

where is thy neighbor?

only thing i have a pen and some paper.

whos really there?

does anyone care?

guess not.

skip rocks on a river bed,

save your trouble,

enoughs been said,

my soul stays red,

with passion,

i'm the assasin.

all alone,

but do i still keep my throne?

i'm gone.

 

 

Reviews

[koty bell]

The skip rocks on a river bed actually has two meanings 1.if u dont care about me...get lost. And 2. Hes so lonely he skips rocks to pass the time

[Geraldine]

There were parts or lines where I was lost but all in all it's a job well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Being alone in thoughts can lead us to dark places. I like the story and the good ending to this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Saki!]

I totally get the poem except for one part. Skip rocks on a river bed? I don't understand that part. Plus I think its spelled ASSASSIN. I had trouble with that word until I realized it was A*s-A*s-In.

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