Blind

In too deep
I don't like this heat
I can't breathe
Please don't leave

You're all I have left
I hate to feel the threat

My heart races
I'm walking in paces
My head is a mess
I don't wanna feel less

Spinning in circles
I hear chuckles
I was treated like a joke
Now I wanna choke
I need a minute
Stay here for my last bit

I don't know if I can hold on long
Everything I am is wrong
I was never of importance
Only to make a good performance

Leaving me alone
It was always my tone

Leave me behind,
Here I stay blind

Reviews

[PaulAnka]

Wow this poem is really beautiful because of how it conveys so much in these verses. This poem feels very real and emotional. It’s so wonderfully done honestly.