I Never Knew

One touch, one smile

One breath of life, just for a while

I never knew, or even had a clue

But then, I hadn't met you.

 

 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading. Reviews welcome

Photograph by Kristin Lee

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Interesting. The idea of this piece has been done many times, but you managed to word it cleverly and concisely, which gave it a different and unique feel. I don't think you needed a lot of imagery or metaphor to develop this particular piece, it just sort of grew up on its own. The flow was nice, the beat was good, and your wording is what made the piece.

[Kristin Lee]

Thank you

[Dhaye]

Cool and cute quatrain :)

[Kristin Lee]

It's simple but it stuck.

[Astro]

It's cute, would be a nice inscription to be carved or etched on some token of love.

[Kristin Lee]

Thanks, its actually a line out of a song I wrote when I was in Jr. High, lol.

[Wednesday Morning]

Sweet and simple, yet speaks volumes. I love it. Keep up the good writes.

[Saumya]

oh!!! this is the shortest and sweeeeeeeeeetest poem i could ever read!!!
fabulous work!!!!!
very welll done!!!
keeeeeeeeep writing and rocking!!!
with best wishes,
saumya

[Kristin Lee]

Thank you

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed dear!!