Awkward

random collision of thouhgts

Caught in the constant current of time, there’s no reason

and certainly no rhyme. The cataclysmic collisions of life,

invoke more impact than all atomic might.  We may die

with a whimper, but we are conceived with a bang! 

Fragile moments, like dirty laundry, awkwardly hang.

 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading. Reviews welcome

Reviews

[Astro]

We are dirty laundry caught in the currents of time. Awkward, cherished, offensive, worn and used, reflections of what we once were and evidence of what we have become. Great and thought provoking nonsense Kristin.

[Kristin Lee]

Sometimes you just feel the ones that are more fast and furious :)

[Astro]

Making things simple makes them easier to connect with too. I think you might be onto something.

[s y e]

I l o v e d the them on this p o e m. It was exactly like, Jack said. It reads f a s t & f u r i o u s!

L o v e d !

~ Noodle.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Fragile dirty laundry provoked some myrth in my mind! But if you talk ironing I can't hack it as it is my nightmare chore. This is a flowing and thought provoking little write about our very purpose and priorities

[Jack...]

Very cool Kristin. This one read fast and furious. I liked this. I love the theme of this.

[B-poet]

Very witty and distinctely profound. Great work. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem a lot but that ending was great ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Kristin Lee]

Thanks Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)