Soul's Tenement

The music in every soul

A note heard inseparable to moan
In a duel recital of lavished excitement
All octaves sung in all sort
Touched the very soul's tenement


Lend me your sentiment in this eerie night
My soul is frozen in this recital
Yet this symphony that I love to hear
Haunt me a sweet embrace

Love! ah, thou music that didst gave
In this solace of confined reality
If bittered by parting
Sing me a sweet symphony

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A outstanding poem. The language made the poem a great read. Each line making the poem stronger and with purpose. I like the last line. When we can hear a symphony. It was damn good. Thank you.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is a wonderful read and write. I enjoyed this write.
Love the last stanza.

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"My soul is frozen in this recital
Yet this symphony that I love to hear
Haunt me a sweet embrace"

NICE-i love this--a beautiful poem/song indeed...
...i love "Sing me a sweet symphony"...it works magnificently in this piece...
...this reads a little bit like 'Chaucer'---the way it shifts--Superb Poetry!!!

..i love this..

james:-)