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A Poem by Krissy

tears stream down her face
at the thought of losing you
you`re the one she cares about the most
without you by her side
shes nothing
cant you see you`re her love
and her world

© 2008 Krissy

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distefano 401

aw heartwrenching concept, nice layout. i don't really have any suggestions except grammatical-i'd change "your" to "you're" in a couple places. nice job!

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on August 6, 2008
Last Updated on August 7, 2008

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Krissy

Canada

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i`m kind of a shy person who like`s to write her feeling`s all down and hide them from people i`ve lost people in a matter of time and i`ve had people die of accidents , nature , and suicide i believe.. more..