Tonight , will be the night

Tonight willl be the last night
the last night i will
love without holding back
and dream about holding you.
and being your everything.
you were my everything
and now i am no longer whole.
i said i wuld love until the say i died.
and i will keep that promise.
and i will love you until tonight.
when the cold, hard steel touches my flesh
and when the blood starts to drip
i know i will soon see you my love.
and when the find my lifeless body on the floor.
they will know why i did this crazy messed up thing.
it was because of love my darling
and how much i did love you.

Reviews

[DoucheFuck;;]

I like this.
With the exception of the ending.

But the beginning/middle is wonderful. I love poems about love, and though the ending is a little bit cliche, it suited the poem well.

Well done.