kill

a surprise for you

heart breaks
brain aches
as you think of those mistakes

wrong things have done
is that known by everyone?
when will forgiveness come?

what is your will
is that to kill or to be killed
by your special someone

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Well killing the special someone may be extreme. Poem is direct and to the point. The strong lines led to a very interesting ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[MissWordSmith]

Ah. now see, this is a very good poem! you finally have something you wish to talk about, and you expressed it wonderfully. Congratulations this was really good!
The last stanza was great!

[Devons]

Great last verse. Really strong. This is so succinct and yet thoughtful. I like it. Especially the title.

[carmz]

wheeee......ka hah well tenchu jejeje patoinx ka dw dyan

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Lovely rhymes!
This poem is fast-paced and exciting. Suspenseful even.
Keep it up Carmz!

Lex

[carmz]

just making a sample hehehehehe................