the GOD'S gift

something that i treasured

I thank GOD for giving me this life
the life I'm enjoying right now

the time I'm managing
for it teaches me to treasure every second
that pass by me

the friends that is true to me and
and those who comforts me

the surrounding I'm living with
for there are lessons that I've learned

from the past that make me strong
and made me knowledgeable enough to face
the true world

and lastly

thank you for giving me
the parents I've now
for because of them I'm
on the right track of life

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very positive poem. You have very good wisdom. A wise person knows when he had great gifts in a life and appreciate them. The poem is beautiful and strong. A outstanding poem of thankfulness.
Coyote

[Rana trad]

Very sincere and from the heart. I think we should all stop for a moment atleast once in a while to thank God for all of his blessings. Do u mean "this" instead of "these" in "I thank GOD for giving me these life".... in the first stanza ??
....................................Anyway Well Done !!!!