Fear and love

Love survives but pain does too
Wheres there is pain,
There is fear.
So much fear
Fear off losing the one I love
Yet there's also something new,
Could it be happiness, joy
For whenever i talk to you,
Theres something that wasn't before.
A need to never leave you alone.
Your all I could ever truly want and ask for.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed a very simple and romantic freeverse piece. It has an innocence about it and could be improved with corrections to the syntax errors.