Far away

    

I am at the place from you far away

how much do i miss how could i say

To achieve the miles i came far 

to this Stream.

Now returning Back has become mine

One and Only Dream.

It's a quiet and peaceful place 

but from you miles far away

Days are going like an centipede

Without you here.

Always brings joy reading your letter

You have already learnt cooking While i am here

And even you have joined in The Choir

It's a dark and shiny place

but from you miles far away

Distance doesn't make us apart

 I can still feel your breath

You have left no space in my heart 

this feeling can never see death

It's cold and chilled place 

but from you miles far away

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[KTizzle]

I liked this a lot! I loved reading it. I did feel the longing that everyone below me marked. I have never experienced this feeling, but your poem gave me a look into it. Thanks for sharing.

[andrew mitchell]

i hate that longing ,that distance when you just want to connect. nice work.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for reading it.......

[wordman]

beautiful,longing poem of love
liked the repeating line

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for reading it and its so nice of you to read my all works thank you for being kind.......

[aLittlePain]

Another great poem! The last stanza is powerful and has a wonderful tone.

Well done

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you......

[Emily]

Great poem!!
Keep it up!!

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you........

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem...I enjoyed reading this poem of yous as always... keep on sharing :)

[Kuldeep desai]

i am glad that you have liked it........:) :) :).........

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and good words for love.
"Distance doesn't make us apart
I can still feel your breath
You have left no space in my heart
this feeling can never see death
It's cold and chilled place
but from you miles far away"
Real love hold on, even with great distance. I like the above lines a lot. People, we have loved. Are always a part of us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you once again...........

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[AprilRN1210]

Can feel the pain and the longing in this one.. you try to enjoy where you are, while missing the one who is far away.. it is moving.. nicely done..

few things I noticed...

"how much do i miss (you) i can't say"... I would also capitalize the "i's" here.

"It's a quite and peaceful place "... did you mean "quiet" instead of "quite?"

[Kuldeep desai]

Can please tell me Why i need to capitalize 'is'?.......

[AprilRN1210]

not is.. your i 's... some you have as I.. and some you have as just i...