Today

Its an crazy poem i wrote whatever came in my mind......

Today is the day enjoy like its your last day

GO for it today you do in your own way

Morning jog,Evening walk,yoga,Meditation

to be fit we do all this s**t,

But still can't avoid frustration

Ur land,Ur mind,Ur brand,Ur hand

Ur the king,life is urs

Urs the kingdom don't care about others

Ur wish,Ur dish,Ur stomach,Ur ache

have it whatever u like it

eat it like u never get it

Crazy,lazy,funny,shiny

U be happy even in the hell

Always say "All is well"

Reviews

[Emily]

'Today is the day enjoy like its your last day'
Love this first line!
Well done

800 members tag (Poetry 101)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the tag Miss.Emily..........

[KWP]

I disagree with what Jahavani says because anyone with a good insight into yoga and meditation will understand that we are all part of the whole and threfore 'It's all good' - yes even s**t ... its about being equanimous too- accepting all as it is and having no opinion .... and frustration can be avoided through the practice of meditation I think J contradicts herself there ...

The minute I read this is a crazy poem my mind relaxed and I accepted each word as it was proffered ... I am a very big believer of all is well - because - yes - no matter what it is all well - life will always flow on and always be just perfect as it is (once you have learnt the fine art of equanimity)

well done xx

[Jen]

Your poem, is good enough to impress the reader but in a way criticizes the main aspects of social life...i.e. lines "Morning jog,Evening walk,yoga,Meditation
to be fit we do all this s**t" are out of place because these are healthy(how can you call them s**t?)and help decrease the frustration too...if you wanna say that frustration can't be avoided, it's not true. It's the state of mind... a person is more frustrated when he has irritable mood or bad/unhealthy surrounding...
And the last line "All is well" is strong your poem possesses..it's good you used it but why should we always say all's well..lol.
Please explain to me, your theme of this poem and then i think, I'll be able to understand what your poem is about!!!

[Kuldeep desai]

hahaha....as i have said before i have written whatever came to my mind i didn't think of anything actually i always write by thinking a lot thi was just an try .........you please read and review my other poem 'Topper' which i have written by thinking a lot.........i ll b waiting for your review and thank u for this review........

[Jen]

Well. Okay!

[Eleanor]

True this is!
We all live in our past or future. I do too. But the thing is that nothings going to happen the way we want.
So just go with it. Live your life to its fullest. Maybe its our last day?
I like the message you gave in this!
nice job :)

[Kuldeep desai]

I am glad that u liked it..........

[ayesha gupta]

it was good..but we should also think about future. :-)

[Kuldeep desai]

you think about future, you care about the past what about present?

[ayesha gupta]

future is our goal, aim in life, which makes us do work hard in present to achieve that.
being in tension, is not what i mean. i mean be aware ,what you do in present would determine your future.