Girl

Ripped jeans and a vintage shirt

a face make-up free

don't forget about her hair

weirdly wavy hair.

she's okay with looking avarage

she believes she has more than looks

This girl can only hope 

to meet somebody

as unperfect as she is. 

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes this is what tugs onto heart...
Perfection is everywhere today. To be unique, we need to find imperfection... Mostly, love held by looks ... till now, it continues to be... But people like me are completely against that. I feel like this poem is written about me, like I used to find certain crazy things in the one made for me. Yeah,finally I found the person and I'm happy cause I chose even without seeing the person...!!!
A sweet and beautiful work presented!!!
Ani : )

[Ashwin Shanker]

'avarage' = Average

Hope the girl meets Mr. Imperfect. It is so pleasing to know that someone is looking for imperfect... I guess perfection is not a trend anymore.

[Chris]

This paused me... the language and intent flowed seamlessly.

[Gabija]

thank you.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
an honest and beautiful poem.......questioning society..........
but also providing the answer.......so subtly.......perfection can go to hell!!!!
loved the simplicity......

awesome poem....
loved it!!!
:)

[Gabija]

thank you.