B*****d father

Cheating father,

crying mother, 

praying daughter

and the son that doesn't give a s**t.

broken family

broken heart

broken glass

which can't be fixed.

PAUSE. 

he still gets forgivinen

from a women that

shouldn't give him a second chance.

Mother is trying to forget, 

but the daugher never will.

Author's Note

For some reason I have mixed feelings about this poem.

Reviews

[Chris]

Of the three I've read so far this one has multiple spelling weaknesses and tastes wrong.

Mothers are women that often fell in love with Fathers and rather than cut them loose can come to accept transgressions just to keep them somewhat near. Sometimes family financial realities also come into play - eating is one hard habit to break and being out in the rain without a roof sucks... Life has realities that we deal with, life with, and yes - never forget.

[Gabija]

very true. thank you for opinion.

[Chris]

welcome and take care. On the whole the three show a good understanding and use of language and knowledge of structure and native speaker ability.