Killer

just some after- Halloween horror

Blood steadily trickles down,

Metal dipped with it.

A smile came from a frown,

Life ends a quickly as I can hit.

 

I hear people screaming,

The power delights me.

It's fun to chase the fleeing,

Blood is what I want to see.

 

The corpses dance for me now,

As blood drains from them.

I am almighty, I want you to bow,

You must follow my every whim.

 

A bloodthirsty smile I can't contain,

Though I know that I am insane.

Reviews

[Colleen a Bean]

um wow it's great creepy but very dark I like :)

[marie]

chilling i love it :)

[lee von cleef]

Why? look inside,Why? "A niponized piece of fifth avenue l"

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you have taken a gruelling topic and written about it so captivatingly, nice work

[RachelReaper]

bloody, gory goodness! Did I mention that I love this kind of thing?

[Blue Ivory]

Ooooooh! This is so dark and cool! You have talent :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

very scary....Should it not read AS QUICKLY AS I CAN HIT? Not..A quickly AS I CAN HIT

[Kurera]

i wonder how many people I have caused fear upon? CX

[Baby Ricochet]

Loved it. Great job

[Aysia]

I like the insanity of this, haha. I'm a fan of Criminal Minds (must I add) so I do a lot of research of "crazy" people. This is cool, haha. I'm scared now =)