The Wait

A Haiku- Butterflies wait for their wings to expand and dry in the sun, before taking flight.The waiting process is very important. Sometimes it is the same for us.

 

 

 

Wet wings on a limb

                        

                    Temporary home outgrown.... 

                     

 Waiting for Sun's strength.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Muse]

I adore the metaphors of a butterfly. They bring such peace and inspiration to the Muse of any writer. And it's no surprise that you match the beauty of this God given wonder. xo

[Nautili]

Thank you, sweetness. I can be a bit flighty at times....lol.

[Nautili]

This is rich, dear Nautili, you have a brain what reaches further than many. This is so symbolic and well said. We sometimes, need to have patience, and accept we are in a sort of situation in life, but better times will come... magnificent work! And a good Haiku. Thank you

E.L.

[Nautili]

Thank you...and I like the glasses!

Hihi lol, that's my dorky look behind the laptop, or puter... ;) xx
You're so welcome dear!

[New Dawn]

I can certainly relate to this - I constantly leave my writing out to dry :) A very clever write - I admire people who can write Haiku's as I cant :)

[An owl on the moon]

Yes... oh yes... How those moments, clinging to chrysalis gives the strength needed to soar... Thank you for this beautiful, profound expression... of butterflies and of our lives...

[Antonio Valentino]

aww what an amazing piece and the picture is fantastic.. it reminds me of a piece i wrote...

wonderful you.. :)

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I love this analogy. great job :)

[Ian H Morrison]

lovely just so damn lovely

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this! "Wet wings on a limb"~This line has such an impact for me...an amazing emotion conveyed in this Senryu. I felt a sense of Faith in waiting for the Sun's Strength. Wonderful write!

[William]

This is one of the best haikus ive ever read. I love the simplicity of the style and how it can express such great emotion. Flawless.

[Nautili]

Thank you for your review. I will check your work soon. :)

[Revery]

As I read this the word "potential" is stuck in my head, representing all the possibility of new days and the future and healing and all the rest of someones life. This is beautiful.