NAKED THOUGHTS 1

On that day I met per chance,

Someone whose mere presence warmed mine heart,

Ecstatic, nay,

Elated I get whenever I spot that radiant smile,

And in the depth of the night as the rest of the world slept,

On my knees I earnestly supplicate to THEE,

That she’d be mine,

Just mine,

For keeps.

 

Reviews

This poem sways differently from your pen name.

I like the flow of words and form. It has good rhythm.

A good read

[Lady Of Darkness]

Hmm its very interesting, don't know what else to say lol.