OH PERFECT WORLD!

OH PERFECT WORLD!

A Poem by kurrupted

In the studio of mine mind,

On the canvass of mine thoughts,

The brush of mine imagination,

Paints a picture,

What picture?

A picture of a world so perfect,

Where the scenery is lush and green,

Where zephyr blows the scent of roses and lilac,

Making them dance to the languid air,

 

A world so fair with no fear,

Where peace and love reigns,

No conflicts and no bullet rains,

No hatred and no pains,

 No diseases and no worries,

No displeases and no follies,

Where all races are equated,

 

 No dominants and none dominated.

A world where family is everything,

Where all have food to eat and clothes to wear,

Roof over all and foot not bear,

 

A world where morality and decency are flexed,

Where respect for each other are never next,

    Oh perfect world,

          Oh perfect world,

              Oh prefect world!

 

© 2008 kurrupted


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There is no such thing as a perfect world or a perfect anything in my opinion. But yes it would be great if there was no hatred or the rain of bullets. I like all your stanzas i think they flow very nicely. It's like your wondering where is this perfect world.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Views so much shared by myself, this is a place I would love to live in, this is a song I would love to hear..

Nice work man, to my eyes this is a peice of brilliance.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2008

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Maiduguri, Nigeria



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