Judging

don't just think of yours

Before judging someone think about what can make them say what they're saying

Before judging music think about why someone would be playing the music they're playing

maybe their feeling lonesome or happy who knows why?

don't be so quick to put your words on them, look to God in the Sky

Before saying someones a negative comment or name

What if they felt like you were the same

let's don't do this to fellow man

let's do good and take a better stand

Why knock down your fellow man

why hit him as hard as you can

give him a helping hand

that's God's plan

Reviews

[Terry O'Leary]

Yes! If we only had the wisdom to behave so...

[Robert Parlange]

Liked the poem.

People tend to jump to conclusions with little evidence. Usually in a negative way. Sort of reflects their inner soul.

[Mari K]

I think the message of the poem is a great one. The idea of being nonjudgmental is beautiful. The flow of the poem was a problem for me. It's important to pay attention to the amount of syllables you use when writing poetry that rhymes. It was better in the middle stanzas though. Thanks for sharing though. It's a great, positive message.

[kyam]

Thank you for your review and critique, I do appreciate it!! It really makes a lot of sense!....Kyam