Are You Really There?

Kymber My Love

                               If you're there will you let me know

                               you know how I miss you and love you so

                               my dreams are so full of you night after night

                               during the day you're never out of my sight

                               Do you feel my love as strong as you did

                               do you know I miss you beyond what I hid

                               you see my tears trickle down my face

                               you see my mind die without a trace

                               You see me yearning to see you soon

                               I always think I see you in the full moon

                               you make my mind go places I've never been

                               I really can't help the state I'm in

                               I love you with every beat of my broken heart

                               I'm so broken because we had to part

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Very good, intense feelings of longing so accurately described, and the pain of unrequited love makes this poem very powerful. Brilliant work :D

[kyam]

I want to thank you for taking your time to review this heartfelt piece of work. I pour my heart out when it comes to my daughters death. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.....Kyam

[BlaqkShadow]

Your most welcome friend :D