Murder

Bloodshed

Mark, what's wrong?

Tell me now

Is she really gone?

Tell me how

What happened to her, tell me now

I screamed silently in my head

Tell me about it and how

Is she really dead?

The police and ambulance are there

They made you get out fast

All you could do is stare

Remembering her at the last

Her neck was messed up too

You don't know what it was

He shot her up, out of the blue

Not knowing why or because

They suspect foulplay

The baby was on the bed

You know what can they say

But she really is dead

Reviews

[sheandherself]

You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer.

[kyam]

I want to thank you so.....Kyam

[BlaqkShadow]

Wow, this is pretty intense, the fast paced rhythm and skilled use of timing in rhyme make it seem like it's reading faster than it is, like you have embraced the emergency and urgency into the poem itself. Chilling but fantastic, well done :D

[kyam]

You are Absolutely Amazing!!! I LOV'E YOU!!!