I can't stop crying

I can't stop lying

I can't stop crying

I think I'm dying

Ask me and I'll be lying

Because I really can't stop crying

My eyes are swollen and red

Mostly I wish I was dead

I can't stop the tears

They bring so much fear

I'm scared with you gone

I don't want to be wrong

We were like best friends

Until the very end

Then death knocked at your door

He found you lying on the floor

Not breathing at all

An ambulance was called

I didn't know what to do

How to be without you

I can't stop crying

I can't stop dying

Reviews

[Pete]

Very sad and touching but beautifully done. Very heartfelt indeed. Nice job Miracle Girl.

[kyam]

Thank you for your kind review. It makes me want to continue writing......Kyam

[Courtney Hough]

Writing with pure emotion is beautiful. When you write from the heart its nothing less then perfect. Beautiful job expressing yourself.

[kyam]

Yes my feelings are so, so real because it happened to me, not just someone on TV, but Me..Thank you for your honest opinion, I appreciate your kind words....Blessings, Kyan

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Your writing is so real. It is hard not to get emotional. I presume this is real life as well. Thank for sharing this wonderful stories. N.

[kyam]

This is too real in my life..Yes my emotions are tied into it very deeply....My emotions were running over.....Kyam

[Antoñyo]

But she is not really 'gone' and your expressive pieces lets her know she is also not forgotten.
Keep healing, Kyam

[kyam]

Thank you for your review, it is greatly appreciated. She is not forgotten....she will always be in my heart.

[Antoñyo]

And you in hers . . . her spirit goes on.

[kyam]

Thank you for your sweetness, you have a beautiful soul.......Kyam