True Love

Is it new love? True love? Or am I imagining things?

Everyday since we met,

I've thought you were the one.

Everyday I think of you

And ask myself,

Why won't you give me a chance?

Am I not good enough?

Am I not the one for you?

Is what I feel not true love?

Please tell me, because

This new love is killing me.

True love is the one

That you will spend the rest of your life with

True love is the one that will die for you

The one that will love you 'till hurts,

But then why won't you do that for me?

Am I not your new love?

Am I not your true love?

Is this not love?

Am I not really in love?

Please answer me love.

Because I feel like this really is

True love.

Author's Note

This is going to be submitted as my first contest. Wish me luck.

Reviews

[CD Campbell]

I don't usually comment on poems about love and pain. It is something that comes and goes like the wind and can be strong then weak. Reading your poem though, I have the opinion that you are at a good start. The structure looks great and you continue on in one continuous coherent thought. I wish you luck on your first contest. CD

[Lost_Soul]

thank you. i appreciate the opinion

[KCthelastboyscout]

I had this same situation in high school. But you have to do something that I never had the courage to do and that's open up and tell that person how you feel.
You have the right words to say written down.Now just say the words

[Maxwell Ryder]

Where have you been? Don’t disappear. More more more.

[Lost_Soul]

LOL..........

[Resa]

Its very heartfelt and honest
LOve can be very confusing at times.
Best of luck on the test

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Some things we think and feel don’t always get felt by others sadly - some people are afraid to show their truths- I believe u asking is the best way to go- I’m sure if they really feel it go they will open up because losing out on the best thing that could ever happen to you would be a big mistake- deep powerful words🌹

[Lost_Soul]

It's too late to "test the waters" because he wouldn't listen to me.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh dear- hope all works out as it should- don’t lose hope🌹

[Lost_Soul]

I tried not to a long time ago because he is a senior and graduating in three weeks and I am a freshman graduating my junior year.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

All shall be well- have peace with what is meant to be will be- I wish only the best for you🌹

[Lost_Soul]

Thank you so much for the support. It means a lot.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Anytime- my pleasure🌹

[Ms Paragon]

I can feel the agony in your tone reading this!I wish you good luck in the contest and in finding true love!

[Lost_Soul]

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.

[Maxwell Ryder]

Have you asked? Did you approach this person? Try again. Be persistent (in a good way).

[Lost_Soul]

Yeah, it's kind of why he won't talk to me anymore. We haven't talked in over 2 weeks.

[Maxwell Ryder]

Any update?

[Lost_Soul]

Well... not really.

[Maxwell Ryder]

Did you submit it to a contest? Let me know if you get any response. I have posted things to contests on this site and no one even answers. Not because I think I would win or anything, but only because I wonder if anyone does anything after submission. I never see any results from old contests either. Let me know if you get the same impression.

[Lost_Soul]

Yeah, I submitted it to a contest, but even though the contest ended a few weeks ago, I haven't heard anything on it.

[Wyrn Tiger]

Good luck. With this one you rely have a chance.

[NEHA]

hmm. quite impressive...
feelings like this do come to teens in the name of love, though ends being an illusion...
hope you aren't into an illusion, are you?
anyway quite the work of a "SMART TEEN"!
#CLAPS

[Lost_Soul]

This story is about me. And thank you.

[NEHA]

Oh then I guessed it right!

[Lost_Soul]

LOL I was also using that poem for a contest as well.