When your about to fly away.

It's about the last moments of life.

When you are about to die, when you have just this little time left. You start to think about your life, about what you have done and what you acomplished. You finally realize that life was just here to be taken away from you. You where just here for no reason, nothing is. You did so much effort you tried to make the best out of everything. You loved, you cried, you saw death with your own eyes. Now your going to experience it, you will be free, no more rules to follow, no more suffering that you have to take. Death is no suffering, its a gate to freedom. Your free, you can fly away now, your death.

Author's Note

please let me know how u think about this poem.

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like...its a lovely poem
Great Job

[Anya]

I think it was beautiful :)
"Your free, you can fly away now" is a beautiful line
lovely write :)