Beating Heart

We are all wandering,
in search-
for something in this lonely world.
We all suffer-
have pain and struggle.
We are all longing,
grasping for a hand-
to pull us out of the darkness.
There is one thing that connects us all-

A beating heart.

Reviews

[Dennis Shanaberg]

I've read this a few times now. I love it.
At first we can see a familiar depressing tone.
But much like life, it's almost easy to overlook how uplifting and inspirational the ending is.
The things that we search for and are missing. The things that tear us apart are shared by everyone.
No one is alone because everyone else feels the same way.

[Laura Ex]

i love how your poems are so pretty. :]
they focus a lot on the good things... i dunno, i feel optimism radiating from your writing. :P